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Post by MTMT on May 20, 2009 21:49:54 GMT -4
Hey guys- Since we're all writers here in one way or another... I just wrote a new short play, I'd love some feedback. It's called "No Faith in Love," but I think the title's going to change... Here's the link: tassell.etc.googlepages.com/NoFaithinLove.pdfLet me know what you think! |
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Post by 'The Solution' Jake Andrews on May 21, 2009 9:32:22 GMT -4
I don't know much about plays. In fact, I don't know much about much. I just pop in a movie, or turn the channel and catch whatever's on...
But, it looked good to me.
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Post by AWA CEO: Mr. Timothy Draven on May 21, 2009 22:37:59 GMT -4
Tried to check it out, but it wouldn't load up on my computer....I'll try again over the weekend bro. I'm sure it's good. It'll be better if it has a character named Timmy....it'd be the greatest if it had a badass character named LuMmy!
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Post by MTMT on May 21, 2009 23:48:13 GMT -4
Actualy, with all the scripts I've written (three thus far), I've included a reference to "Almost Famous." This one has 2, actually- well, more like 1 and half, since they're related.d
Try to check it out when you get the chance..,.
ps im druuuuunk.
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Post by MTMT on May 29, 2009 14:31:33 GMT -4
Anyone? Anyone?
Bueller?
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Post by Anthony Jordan on Jul 10, 2009 21:49:31 GMT -4
That was pretty good, very dark (actually made me uncomfortable a couple of times, which isn't a bad thing). I didn't expect it to end as it did. The title helps it make sense to me, but it would be good to see it expanded. I'd like to see how William fared with the guilt as he obviously has a host of emotional issues.
I'm in "Feedback" mode tonight. Sorry it took me so long.
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